• RebekahWSD@lemmy.world
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    10 months ago

    I think this makes me old because I like using ellipses as a pause! Maybe I’ll just go to writing the word uh in everywhere so people know my brain is old and trying to think of things as I write.

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      10 months ago

      Yeah until you’ve got your family texting you “We need to talk…” and then, the conversation is asking what you’re doing this weekend.

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        10 months ago

        I try to not put them at the end of the sentence, I’m not so old I don’t get the implication of that! It’s in the middle of the sentence as a break!

        Or sometimes as a literary device to indicate an amount of time has passed.

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          10 months ago

          The implication is that you know the next part of the sentence but keep it unwritten. The best exemple is when making a list, a, b c …

          Sometimes it’s even just a indicator there’s gonna be a next part, like the “We need to talk…”

          Although the more degenerate use is to imply the “you know what i mean/imply”, a bit like the english innit in some sens.

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          10 months ago

          Using ellipses in the middle of a sentence is considered very rude.

          Have you ever met someone who pauses in the middle of a sentence… just to fuck with you by injecting pointless suspense? Well, believe it or not… this is what ellipses communicate in written English. You’re building a lot of dramatic suspense and slowing down the pace at which people read your messages… and if you don’t pay it off… you seem like an asshole.

          I don’t watch much reality television, but those shows like to inject massive pauses right before the judge reveals whether the chef made a good meal… just so they’ll gasp more and cry with relief and the audience will stay invested. But I hate it! It’s really annoying! And it’s how some people type.

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      10 months ago

      Depending on the day I use commas like they were on sale at Costco but are about to go bad any moment. I did the same thing with ellipses for years.

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        10 months ago

        Me and commas are not friends because of this. I use them too often and need to stop! I still use too many when doing creative writing thingies.

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          10 months ago

          It’s so liberating to use short sentences. You’re writing a paragraph on a page. The reader is going to know that they all relate closely to each other. Make every clause a sentence! It’s fine!

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            10 months ago

            It is good, but i also like some commas too.

            For less important propositions, or to have some propositions closer together. Just like paragraphs link some sentences together when having the same point.

            I think having that registery and doing it right is really what’s important. Short sentences is great advice because it breaks the habit of long ones, which we get from speaking.